this is simply fantastic, the vocals, the lyrics, the instrumental... this is really beautiful, i love it to bits! :3
good luck with the nguac, youre def making it to the finals!
this is simply fantastic, the vocals, the lyrics, the instrumental... this is really beautiful, i love it to bits! :3
good luck with the nguac, youre def making it to the finals!
thanks a lot!!
a really good track! i quite enjoyed it! good luck with the nguac :3
Yooo thank you for the kind words! I hope you make it to the final round as well! May the best win :)
~ Ahurac
really good track! this is exactly what i would put in my music playlist (as a dumbstep junkie lol)
the whole thing is perfect, im not joking when i say that i like this, from the ps1 rave/dnb aesthetic, to the nice drop transition (especially the way it transitions to the first drop LIKE DAYUM, so sudden, so weird)
the basses are really nice and crisp, so are the drums actually (we stan a good pan snare and some fun breakbeats), the distorted vocal is great and the whole mix works *fantastically* :3
and that is my ted talk on why i give this 5 stars, nothing bad about it, just perfect for my taste, good luck with the nguac, i can see you making it to the finals!
Well thank you kindly, Sir! Much appreciated! <3
this is really cute! i have to give it to you for the interesting vibes, the variety of instruments and the creative tempo changes
the only problems i had with this track is the way you approached the key change and the mix; specifically, the violin feels somewhat unclear at times, somewhat taking away from the song, the same can be said about that flute esc sound that comes in the second half of each chorus/drop section, it feels somewhat resonant and it sort of covers the whole drop, i feel like you could have taken back a bit from those resonances and it would have make the mix a lot clearer
the key change is *nice,* but i feel like you could have approached it differently, i cant give any great ideas for how you could have done it other than just having something *different* in there to signal the drastic change in tone (eg a different riser)
as negative as the review sounds, this track is really good, and i really enjoyed it! good luck with the nguac, my friend :)
Thanks for the honest review. For the mix issues with the violin, the rhythm that I used became sort of distorted as the tempo increased, leading to a sort of unclear drone. I didn't really have enough time to fix it, though. Glad you enjoyed it never-less. xp
all of the elements of this track line up really well! i really like it
im giving this a 4 only because i wish there was a bit more variation in the breaks; they sound really good, but there isnt much change in the pattern they play
outside of that, even if the song is short and doesnt have much variation, i feel like everything in it has been done really well and works together perfectly, both mix and sound design wise
great track! good luck with the nguac! :')
Thank you, SnaresWorks!
this whole song has a really cool, dark vibe to it - i really love the direction you went. i especially love the last buildup, where everything sort of goes silent and the bass roars underneath
now, the only reason im really giving this a 4 is the mix; imo, i would make the drums pop a little more, since they feel drenched out by the bass and other sounds (especially in the first drop); even if the drums themselves arent the focus of the track, i still feel like theyre a bit too weak
outside of that, this is a great entry for the knockout round, loved it! :3
thank you! i kind of had to rush the mix at the end, so i understand your complaints. good luck in the knockout round!
this was pretty good, and really clean; the overall vibe and aesthetic of the whole journey is great. i really like how the mood changes from section to section, a bit at a time, yet everything still feels like its part of the same song
love it :3
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